This prologue is beautifully well-written. I read it out loud, and damn, that was good. I could feel Elsa's fear and despair but also her combative spirit. I really do like the atmosphere you created here. I already have so many questions about Elsa, Brad, their daughter and those dangerous men. I guess I have to read to figure all that out lol. I also enjoy your style, it's very flowing and pleasant to read.
This prologue is beautifully well-written. I read it out loud, and damn, that was good. I could feel Elsa's fear and despair but also her combative spirit. I really do like the atmosphere you created here. I already have so many questions about Elsa, Brad, their daughter and those dangerous men. I guess I have to read to figure all that out lol. I also enjoy your style, it's very flowing and pleasant to read.
Please keep it up and update soon.
LS.
Thanks alot :*