Great story! The flow, descriptions and grammar are professional! Great work! I enjoyed reading it and laugh at few moments. Was this story something that you had with for a while or did it come spontaneously from the scenes of the clip I posted? Cheers and keep writing! ^.^
Thanks for reading. Actually I have written this before, but I was kind of stuck with it. But now after this contest, I feel like I can finally go on with this so thanks again for the feedback. Even if I was the only one who entered.
Was this story something that you had with for a while or did it come spontaneously from the scenes of the clip I posted?
Cheers and keep writing! ^.^