hi! the title was really intriguing and eye-catching. a really good irony, if you ask me. it's also like i was reading a version of confessions of a shop-a-holic. it's fun! however, i saw that your tenses are not completely in sync with your story. try using past or past progressive tenses. it may be overrated but it does wonders. the chapter also is fast-paced to the point that some dialogues between characters are not developed. there are also times when there is a change in dialogue that it was fast without signals. it's like getting whiplash. nevertheless, your chapter is wonderful and i hope my comments will help you instead of discouraging you. i really look forward to Janice's adventures.

p.s. really sorry for the harsh comments. i'll understand if you will go harpy on me.