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SparkleCadet
I meant the intro to the story that we're working on together. But thanks for your feedback!
T. S. Stone
Oh, haha, sorry. Well, I do think your current description for the story is a little vague. I think you should probably explain more on what happens in the middle of the story and maybe add a hint as to how the story will end or ask a question to let readers become curious about the outcome.
SparkleCadet
@T. S. Stone, okay. thanks!
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