This was the only critic that came to mind: "A green dress with a blue sash? Those colors so don't go!" But if blue holds a significant meaning, I won't tell you to change it. I loved the description that went into the first part of the story and I could visualize it so perfectly. I do find it a bit odd that Eve has wings as I am so used to the bible stories of her and Adam being normal humans, but this is a very interesting twist. Keep it up!
That was certainly a very interesting and I have to say I may become obsessed, I am glad to give you my support through this (I'm guessing) long journey. You truly do have a gift.
thanks for the support! If you have any feedback regarding anything you dont like, o improvements or even if you want a sneakpeek at the next chapter dont hesitate to send a message
Interesting written and very detailed. Keep it up! (thumbs up)
If you need any information about sword fencing, don't hesitate to ask, because I've done few years (épée) fencing.
Cheers!
If you need any information about sword fencing, don't hesitate to ask, because I've done few years (épée) fencing.
Cheers!