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Alef Magnus

There's a professional quality to this and I'm seriously impressed. The way the characters were introduced was done so smooth and the characterization for each spoke volumes.

Great job man.

9 years agoReply

SkyGuy_SoFly

Thanks dude. I do hope you read more. I'm done with the story and am currently typing up the last four chapters. So catch up and stay tuned. :)

9 years agoReply

Percival15

Wow just wow. I'm only a chapter in but already I'm in love with this story. From the descriptive writing style to the way the characters are introduced.

I love it

9 years agoReply

SkyGuy_SoFly

Thank you so much! I'm glad you like my style. This is my signature, I always want to make sure the reader can visualize something even remotely close to what I was imagining whilst writing this.

9 years agoReply

SkyGuy_SoFly

Oh and please do leave a like! :D

9 years agoReply

XXjoeyXX

In the first paragraph December should be capitalized. Few minnor errors, but we all make them. Its a good start, so I'll keep reading for now, see where it goes

10 years agoReply

SkyGuy_SoFly

Awesome. Please leave a like if you enjoyed

10 years agoReply

XXjoeyXX

@SkyGuy_SoFly, I did. i'm working on reading the next chapter, but i read slow

10 years agoReply

SkyGuy_SoFly

@XXjoeyXX,Ok. Cool. Thank you!

10 years agoReply

Shirley Lee

Typo: gentle hand

10 years agoReply

SkyGuy_SoFly

Ok. Make sure to leave a like if you enjoyed it. (Besides the typo😂)

10 years agoReply

Shirley Lee

@SkyGuy_SoFly, Just liked your story and finished this part. Another typo spotted 😂😂 "out of sight, out of mind"
I like your vivid descriptions and I learnt a lot from it. Glad to see your story is making it to the front page! 😁

10 years agoReply

SkyGuy_SoFly

@Shirley Lee, I know! Me too. I mean I'm so proud. I'm only 14 after all

10 years agoReply

Bookyness

Argh! I don't understand why my feedback has been laid out so weirdly, but hopefully you can still understand it!

10 years agoReply

SkyGuy_SoFly

I enjoyed it. I thought it was pretty easy to understand.

10 years agoReply

Bookyness

@SkyGuy_SoFly, good ☺️

10 years agoReply

SkyGuy_SoFly

@Beckyness, Did you leave a like? And what'd you think of issue 2?

10 years agoReply

Bookyness

@SkyGuy_SoFly, I shall prompty leave you a like and I may have to leave issue 2 for another day, since I am rather busy, but I shall be delving into it soon!

10 years agoReply

SkyGuy_SoFly

@Beckyness, Thank you. Sorry if i seem needy but I just like to watch the view count and like count rise. It makes me feel accomplished. Thank you so much for the support

10 years agoReply

Bookyness

@SkyGuy_SoFly, It's okay - I'm exactly the same with my stories!

10 years agoReply

SkyGuy_SoFly

@Beckyness, Haha. Yeah. It gives you a feeling of fulfillment.

10 years agoReply

SkyGuy_SoFly

@SkyGuy_SoFly, So what're you working on right now, as in writing on this site.

10 years agoReply

Bookyness

@SkyGuy_SoFly, To be completely honest, nothing! College seems to have sapped my creative juices... I'll be sure to let you know when motivation returns

10 years agoReply

SkyGuy_SoFly

@Beckyness, Oh. That's sad. I wish your creativity well. So have you read any more of my story?

10 years agoReply

Bookyness

@SkyGuy_SoFly, Indeed, I have

10 years agoReply

SkyGuy_SoFly

@Beckyness,Cool

10 years agoReply

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