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This isn't my type of my story however, I like the ending A LOT. I am a complete SUCKER for romance and "bad boys" and all that. I like the idea of Seline going against rules and doing something she knows she isn't supposed to.
Your chapter was well-edited with only one typo and you seemed to know what you were writing about. I wasn't confused at any point or re-reading out of confusion. Well-done! Because of the twist at the end, I will keep reading because I actually enjoyed this, unlike other dystopian novels. I wasn't trying to be rude or harsh in any of this. I am just giving my honest opinion and feedback. Good Job!! I will bookmark and recommend to my followers!