This is like a piece of spoken word poetry..I like the theme about brothers and I liked how you explored the flame and power of such a friendship, it's a cool and stylish piece which fit very well with reading it out loud I think!
@SuperStallion, actually I just found out about the meaning of 'ho' through searching on google after reading your poem..I learned a new word today! *looks away embarrassed*
@SuperStallion, Hello, I am just randomly joining the conversation. That was brilliant!!! But I'm just saying, since I'm such a fast writer and all, that I could write that much in half an hour. I am not trying to show off because it would take me at least 2 years to write a piece of poetry that long. I speciallise in stories. But, yeah, SO COOL.
@Jess Rufus,Oh. That's cool. I love writing. Hey keep an eye out on my profile. I wrote a short story today. Just gotta transfer it from the ten sheets of paper to the website.
That was brilliant!!!
But I'm just saying, since I'm such a fast writer and all, that I could write that much in half an hour.
I am not trying to show off because it would take me at least 2 years to write a piece of poetry that long.
I speciallise in stories.
But, yeah, SO COOL.
You're obviously much better than I am at it.