Thank you! Yeah believe it or not I wrote this in the span of 180 minutes. I love it myself. 

You should also leave a like and follow me. There's more on the way! You should also check out my other stories and poems. 

@SuperStallion, I see! I'm happy to hear you're proud of your piece! :')

@once upon a star, Haha. And thank you for appreciating it. 

@SuperStallion, ok!:) I'll follow you after typing this! teehee! *grins* ^^

@once upon a star, Haha. Ok. Much appreciated. 

@SuperStallion, actually I just found out about the meaning of 'ho' through searching on google after reading your poem..I learned a new word today! *looks away embarrassed*

@once upon a star, Haha. Really I didn't mean it in an offensive way I was just trying to stick closely to the expression "Bro's before Ho's"

@once upon a star, I was not referring to prostitutes I was referring to Just women who've treated us bad or have just dragged us down

@SuperStallion, I see! I understand! :) *nods softly* no worries! *thumbs up*

@once upon a star, Haha. Good. Cool. Last thing I needed was a raging feminist down my throat. XD

@SuperStallion, :)) *starts giggling * cool!

*skips away and does a happy dance*

@once upon a star, Haha ok. 

@SuperStallion, sorry about my random bursts of energy :( *hides back in the bushes* 

@once upon a star, Haha. You're cool

Have a good day! 

@once upon a star,You too

@SuperStallion, Hello, I am just randomly joining the conversation. 
That was brilliant!!!
But I'm just saying, since I'm such a fast writer and all, that I could write that much in half an hour.
I am not trying to show off because it would take me at least 2 years to write a piece of poetry that long.
I speciallise in stories.
But, yeah, SO COOL.

@Jess Rufus, Thank you so much! You should follow. I just broke my writers block. I'm about to upload a short story this week

@Jess Rufus,Oh and I could write that much in story form in half an hour too

@Jess Rufus, Poetry just requires a little more thought that's all

@SuperStallion, I'm still rubbish.
You're obviously much better than I am at it.

@Jess Rufus, Oh, and I am now following you. :-D

@Jess Rufus, Thanks for the follow! I'm a new writer I've only been writing for about two years. 

@SuperStallion, Same!!!

@Jess Rufus,Oh. That's cool. I love writing. Hey keep an eye out on my profile. I wrote a short story today. Just gotta transfer it from the ten sheets of paper to the website.