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urmom
Hey! I liked this first chapter and am looking forward to reading more chapters. It just has a bunch of little mistakes that can get fixed easily. I can edit your story for you if you're willing to go check out my story and give me some feedback. Other than that, I liked the cliffhanger. Keep writing! 😘
mia lounder
Thanks a lot! It would be great if you fix my mistakes :) And i will check your stories <3
urmom
@mia lounder, You have to allow people to suggest edits. I don't see the option o suggest edits at the bottom of your story. I also really like the name love.
mia lounder
@hanshy I just couldnt find the option to allow people editing.Can you help me please? :) And also thank you!
urmom
@mia lounder, Let me look at my story and try to see how I did it.
urmom
@mia lounder, Go to "edit story info" and click 'allow reader's suggest edits"
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