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jade
Hello, we chose to read this fan fiction because we love the Harry Potter films.
As fans, we found this fanfiction interesting. In our opinion, it is a good piece of fan fiction because it is easy to read. However, the vocabulary is too simple. Also, there are some long passages in this fanfiction, such as in the second episode at the Hospital Wing.  You should also introduce the characters' full names at the beginning of each dialogue, as there are many and it’s easy to get confused.
Overall, we loved finding this universe 19 years later with the children of our favourite character in this mysterious story.
Good luck for the future!
6 months agoReply
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