Pretty good. I like it, even with the cabin in the woods cliche.

Quite a good read and I like how it goes. Really keeps a good flow going too.

oh and i found an error to let you know "find your arch rival dead on n in your own house."
hope that helps.

So, Samantha did kill him, and Jess cleaned up Samantha's tracks?

I was literally craning my neck towards the laptop screen, craving for more and more! You sure know how to make your readers come to the edge of their seats!

You do this genre quite well mi'lady.

Deja Vu? Otherwise not only the manipulation but also the twist at the end make this a great story.