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Comments - 【繁星之子的航行日記】——第一期 | Penana
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冥羶
先生標題錯誤（癱）
6 years agoReply
恆夜
灰色頭髮綁馬尾……這不是第五人格的伊索嗎！？
6 years agoReply
But
喔~妳懂喔!
6 years agoReply
恆夜
@湮,當然啊！就是那個遺照組嘛
6 years agoReply
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@恆夜,恩~
6 years agoReply
希斯
方便的話也能寫雲船是觀光旅遊或是冒險、客船、貨船等等。
6 years agoReply
希斯
湮湮也太快！
可以再多多描寫星球樣貌或是生態跟特色喔！
6 years agoReply
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OK~
6 years agoReply
But
請問日記是要怎麼寫?
6 years agoReply
希斯
@湮,日記的部份可以從駐留的第一天寫起，遇到什麼人，也能夠寫來星球停留的旅客的事。
6 years agoReply
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@子海,ok~
6 years agoReply
But
@子海,是寫在一起嗎?
6 years agoReply
希斯
@湮,是分開寫的，簡介有例子可以看！
6 years agoReply
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@子海,好~
6 years agoReply
希斯
@湮,標題名稱記得改成【繁星之子】忠誠的劍士
6 years agoReply
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