The way you talk about your dreams makes me feel incredibly safe to share mine. Perhaps we can create a space for vulnerability tonight, where desires can be openly expressed?

This is a good start to what I can expect as an action-packed story. Although if you were planning to make the reveal a surprise, the Intro kind of spoiled it. This chapter had the very basics set up so I think you've got a potentially great story to tell.

I really like the vigilante setup :) Feels like watching the show, "Arrow" :)