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薑毛辣椒
這段寫起來的感覺有點類似劇本了呢！其實那些括號有點不太必要，也沒什麼詳細寫出背景🤔🤔，不過或許作者是有些目的的？
嗯嗯…不對，場景描寫的不錯，大概是標點符號看來不太習慣，不是「」而是“  ”😂😂
5 years agoReply
冬結
好的，我會試著把它給改回「」
5 years agoReply
薑毛辣椒
@冬結,其實這沒關係，因為大陸那邊好像是用“   ”
5 years agoReply
冬結
原來如此，學到新知識了呢！
5 years agoReply
薑毛辣椒
@冬結,那是因為有大陸的作家來問我們的寫作習慣才知道的
5 years agoReply
冬結
@薑毛辣椒好的
5 years agoReply
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