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無所謂的人請原諒我
我覺得整個文章像是寫詩一樣，極為感性，讓人看了有種柔柔的感覺。
雖然沒有看到真·帶娃日常，不過因為劇情的限制吧，這樣寫也是很可愛的！
感謝大大第一個發文，要不然我這項創挑就要太監了ಥ_ಥ
6 years agoReply
糸口月
看到太監這個形容忍不住笑了W
嘗試用著詩篇或著傳唱歌謠的形式去寫，雖然可能有點失敗(#
畢竟雖然因為文風的關係沒有深入呈現，帕里翁過去其實被傷得很重，就像童話或傳說總是輕描淡寫幾句帶過殘忍的事實一樣。


6 years agoReply
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