I think it's a nice and tight little story! Although there are a few minor typos, the story is easily relatable and it seems to develop into an interesting plot line bit by bit towards the end! I would love to know how it all goes!:)
I found that Enrique is a Spanish boy's name meaning 'Ruler of the Home' - was it a specially intended detail? I think it fits in quite well with the story!
Thank you so much for your comment- I'll definitely try to finish it.PS - no I didn't have any idea about the meaning of the name - must be a coincidence.
I found that Enrique is a Spanish boy's name meaning 'Ruler of the Home' - was it a specially intended detail? I think it fits in quite well with the story!
Looking forward to the ending!:)