Thank you! This is an old story. But I still do know what's supposed to happen and the overall mystery. The question remains, however, when will I ever write this again. Maybe in the future. For now, I'm busy doing other things.

Thank you, Comrade! It's an old story of mine I never got to finish. I'll be posting the subsequent chapters in a few.

@Alef Magnus, Are you going to work on the story again? It's a great start like how Comrade said. I think you can even change the order of some scenes or add some new storylines in it.

@Coen Wonder, I wrote this back in 2011 and I think I got around to Chapter 5. I have to re-focus again if I'm going to continue this on 2015. It's really a convoluted mystery. Kind of lost the notes I kept for the whole plot but it's still in my mind I hope :)

I can see you are quite good at creating some dramatic/climax scenes and I think you should really see if you can complete it by editing and adding a few new plots. I know it can be a lot of work:) Somehow I think new chapters can be added in between the old chapters to give surprises or mysteries.

@Coen Wonder, thank you for the feedback! Really helpful stuff, I'll keep that in mind. The next chapter is already up and I'll be posting the rest soon.