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我要拍打上萬個你！((拍打拍打
8 years agoReply
MK泡麵
在月光下決堤是什麼意思呢？
對不起，本人國文不是很好>_<
8 years agoReply

這裏的決堤是指淚水決堤。
8 years agoReply
MK泡麵
@Apollō,喔喔，感謝解釋
8 years agoReply
@楓月,
請問還有沒有甚麼不明白的地方呢？
8 years agoReply
MK泡麵
@Apollō,沒有了，謝謝你
8 years agoReply
@楓月,
那麼你認為這三行寫得如何呢？
8 years agoReply
MK泡麵
@Apollō,總覺得「消滅」這個詞有點突兀，改一下可能會更有詩意
8 years agoReply
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