To elaborate on "...damn this is...the feels right now." I find this poem quite well presented though I wish for some punctuation to give me an idea of the poets meter. But I see the message, I see the warrior in the child, and the child in every warrior, and that is a compliment. Be assured that your craft for poetry is one that needs to be honed, but not by much to make the words really stick to the metaphorical dart board. Well done @roseofnoonvale.
Still a great poem as it is now though, just so you'd know, I do like it. Punctuation is just a suggestion, readers of poetry will read in meter on their own, unless given clear commas or periods, even semi colons.