Thank you :) and funny thing is I do my poetry exactly like that too, only when I'm randomly inspired haha. Most of the pieces I choose to post I also feel I shouldn't be posting, but in a creative sense it's the best way to express myself. Once you learn to get over the fear of what people will think of your work the easier it is to have your 'random inspiration', because chances are there are at least a handful of people who will be able to relate to you and your work. Poetry isn't meant to be clean or logical, It's the whole reason why it has it's own subheading in creative writing :)

@jelly.jaybee, Sorry for such a late answer, I was asleep (^ ^;).


Anywho, I posted one I wrote awhile ago. I personally liked it but my english teacher didn't accept my work, saying that it wasn't accurate or something. So I have mixed feelings about that one.