For stream of consciousness, this is well done. Its obvious you have talent and I would like to read your other, non-stream of consciousness, stories. Good job!
Hey, thanks for the comment! I don't really use penana anymore and honestly can't say I'm a fan of much I wrote here, so I was surprised to get the email notification. Thanks for taking the time to read the story.
I found this somewhat confusing to read, as if I were reading the thoughts of the character who had just killed her abusive husband and downed three bottles of wine afterward. So actually? Yeah This is appropriate. Keep up the good work!