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錯字多，眶號說話沒框好，故事有些雜亂，分成各段來寫，或許比較有故事內容，但其實星形的部分，只出現在其中一段裡面。

我希望的是，那以前你參加過我的挑戰的問題可以先改掉，故事的劇情可以慢慢撰寫，這樣不會太倉促。

另外，內容有些有趣，還不錯，感到輕鬆感。

但個人認為，分段寫好幾段的故事，實在有難，繼續加油吧😆，也感謝你的參與。
8 years agoReply
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8 years agoReply
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