Just a slight grammatical error near how the he is converted to her, In talking bout the girls late father, Other than that a few points
1) There is NEVER a symbol of avatar, so describing it would be a good idea.
2) The symbol doesn't mean strong power to one element (Here her fire bending) but the fact that she can CONTROL the other elements, Unless you are talking about the avatar state, Which I am guessing you arent.
3) Give us a brief about this universe. At least the previous avatars. Was it after Aang, Before Aang, or even maybe after Korra? Fire bending means the earth bender has been born?
So after aang, korra AND another bender? Or an entirely separate universe?
Also for Fire Bending to take place, Flow of chi is very important, I think the pollen wouldn't trigger her to fire bend. There is literally no reason for it too.
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1) There is NEVER a symbol of avatar, so describing it would be a good idea.
2) The symbol doesn't mean strong power to one element (Here her fire bending) but the fact that she can CONTROL the other elements, Unless you are talking about the avatar state, Which I am guessing you arent.
3) Give us a brief about this universe. At least the previous avatars. Was it after Aang, Before Aang, or even maybe after Korra? Fire bending means the earth bender has been born?
So after aang, korra AND another bender? Or an entirely separate universe?