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8 years agoReply
不日的基特
很感謝您的挑戰~。
作者擅長從日常小事中入手，去闡釋對主題的想法和帶出自己在此中得到的深思。不過，作為小說創作，這篇嚴格來說並不合格，這篇更偏向抒情散文，流於作文之感，過多抒情和說理，情節薄弱近乎無，真是很可惜了。
不過，作者文字功底顯而易見不錯的，請繼續加油，期待你的新作哦。
8 years agoReply
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