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滄藍
怎麼看這女王是人族王國的不幸啊……
很遺憾沒打起來，敘述簡單讀起來比較像是童話，有些地方如人物心境與性格若詳細描述應該會更加有奇幻小說的味道吧？
8 years agoReply
瀧介
對啊！可我個人通常在創作挑戰內都沒有詳細清楚，是因為我想在創作挑戰內寫短些。

滄藍姐還看不出來我每次的挑戰嗎😏😏
8 years agoReply
滄藍
@瀧介, 都可以，多寫一些就會加重奇幻小說的氛圍，寫少些就是簡略成精簡的童話故事囉。
8 years agoReply
瀧介
喔？不是選一個喔？

老人家，抱歉😆😆
8 years agoReply
滄藍
不會，是我題目也忘了說orz
8 years agoReply
滄藍
等等，你的狼跟購物狂呢OAO
8 years agoReply
瀧介
那容我修改一下，如果只是南瓜馬車，這個故事還不錯，我覺得啦，這樣我就要換故事了

嘿嘿
8 years agoReply
瀧介
已修改
8 years agoReply
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