I like the idea! I can't help but find it hilarious even when it's not supposed to be! XD Spot on. However, there is a little thing I noticed and it's confusing me. It's basically where you put the description tags and whatnot. Sometimes I can't tell if it's Evan or Abby speaking because of the "Abby sighed" or "Abby nodded eagerly", which was written right after Evan said something (at least I'm pretty sure he was the one who spoke those reasonable SANE sentences). Other than that, I find this to be a very interesting start to a misadventure!