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River
I really like the story. Great job! 
I had say you just needed to edit, as I felt a few lines were confusing and be careful while going between the past and present tense. 
Other than that, it's an amazing story! 
8 years agoReply
Ihsan_author
Ahhh... At last there is a comment for me! Thank you very much and i'm glad to hear your appreciation. I'm started felt lonely lately because no one replied me. 

I will try to edit it and learn the grammar more ^^. Once again thank you River
8 years agoReply
River
@Iskandar, That's totally fine. You are actually the fastest person to reply^^
8 years agoReply
Ihsan_author
@River,because there is nothing i do right now except this :D
8 years agoReply
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