I really like the story. Great job! I had say you just needed to edit, as I felt a few lines were confusing and be careful while going between the past and present tense. Other than that, it's an amazing story!
Ahhh... At last there is a comment for me! Thank you very much and i'm glad to hear your appreciation. I'm started felt lonely lately because no one replied me.
I will try to edit it and learn the grammar more ^^. Once again thank you River
I had say you just needed to edit, as I felt a few lines were confusing and be careful while going between the past and present tense.
Other than that, it's an amazing story!
I will try to edit it and learn the grammar more ^^. Once again thank you River