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Jun
這是一篇很有張力的短篇，情緒表達直接且準確。雖然主角最後覺得「好爛」（可能是指結局或自己的遭遇），但作為讀者，我覺得這種「徹徹底底的失去」反而是一種很強的文學風格。​
你覺得這篇的結局「好爛」，是指你覺得主角做錯了決定，還是你覺得這結局太殘酷？
1 week agoReply
霓虹燈
好爛是指我寫的好爛，自嘲一下
1 week agoReply
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