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godess
加油
12 hours agoReply
原子能

「格格格不入」-> 好像多了一個「格」字。
「滿死濕滑泥濘」->「滿是」。
「久而之久」->「久而之久」。
文字畫面感很強，世界觀有點長，修仙結合次世代電玩，感覺上會是爽文類型。
1 day agoReply
魚寶
謝謝🙏
1 day agoReply
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