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楠都月
比較多短句 
其實以作者的功力應該可以寫正常的短段的（？
2 weeks agoReply
星語
比較習慣這樣
因爲我看到一大坨很容易會想要跳過😂
2 weeks agoReply
原子能
宇宙級危機，重來一次的機會，我的小說也是這個核心，宇宙級危機，從零開始，看來應該有很多可以借鏡的地方.
3 weeks agoReply
星語
嗯嗯
這個故事想很久了
2 weeks agoReply
成鏡蹤
#1我讀了很多次。
3 weeks agoReply
走火入魔的Aurora
很喜欢写宇宙的作品，作者还请继续努力。
1 month agoReply
星語
謝謝你的評語
會繼續努力的有什麼建議都可以提可以討論
1 month agoReply
星語
現在還在修前面這本書剛開始而已還很長可以慢慢看沒關係
1 month agoReply
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