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Lalaline sponsored 50coins for Issue 1!
圖文好看 值得推推~
2 months agoReply
LI
謝謝支持
2 months agoReply
胖达鲸
开篇很有趣！金句频出啊，人类在假期容易误判，多年夫妻成兄弟，过分真实哈哈哈！
小小建议，感觉第一章挺长的，其实可以拆成两章，读起来感觉轻松些，也有助于提高数据。比如，4000字一章，阅读和喜欢都只能是1. 分为2章，同样4000字可以挣2个阅读和喜欢。
2 months agoReply
LI
因為寫作能力還在進步中、大家的意見都會認真參考
2 months agoReply
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