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小羊
ㄟ 感覺不錯呢 
很有意境 
2 months agoReply
北海沙丁魚
很有那種被排除在外的感覺～
對了，如果「訂」改成「騰」，你覺得如何，騰有那種房間原本有東西，但被弄出去變成空房的感覺。
（我自己覺得適合，當參考就好～
2 months agoReply
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