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沐紫藜
看大大的文筆是我喜歡的，看主角帶有吐槽的口吻，真的會讓人很想繼續看下去呢~

但不得不說，我一直不太會寫第一人稱的角色，因為我覺得我要說的事情很多，"自己"很難說完，所以更覺得大大很厲害，希望可以再享受故事的過程中，順便偷偷取經。
4 months agoReply
霜風化雨
我也是第一次嘗試第一人稱的寫法，一起加油！
4 months agoReply
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孤狼
這位少俠的名號頗有故友之風啊
4 months agoReply
霜風化雨
那是必須的這代號就是夠中二啊！
4 months agoReply
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