this seemed like a decent attempt at a world war z-type zombie story, but it seems very cliche. There is little to no background and the exposition seems very forced. Much of the information is scattered and irrelevant
Hey, thanks for reading! The information that I put in was relevant to Zed's character. He was proud of what was accomplished and that he was a part of all that.
I am aware that the exposition seems forced and is something that I am working on. I posted this without doing any editing beyond spell check.
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I am aware that the exposition seems forced and is something that I am working on. I posted this without doing any editing beyond spell check.
Again thank you so much for reading!