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annielens
I absolutely loved the vibe of your story it felt so atmospheric and alive i have some ideas. I’d love to share them with you if that’s okay
Hey!Your story was amazing I could picture every scene like a comic! I’m @lunapuresoul, a commission based comic artist, and your writing really inspired me.If you'd like,I can make your story into comic adaptation!You can reach me on Discord (lunapuresoul) or Instagram (lunaartsoul).
Charles James
Hi, fellow author. I’ve been reading your story and I really admire the effort and consistency you’ve been putting into it, it really shows. I’m an author as well and recently published my book on Amazon. I enjoy connecting with other writers and exchanging ideas about writing, storytelling, and just ways we can get more eyes on our work. If you’re open to a quick author-to-author chat, I’d love that. You can reach me on Discord: charles_james11 / Telegram: @CharlesJames_1 or Email: [email protected]
Victoria Hartzell
The tension in this scene was incredible! Did you already know how this conflict would resolve, or are you discovering it as you go?
Moonlit_irina
THis chapter had me completely hooked from the very first scene! I loved the creepy, cinematic elevator sequence, the sudden blackout and the masked figure felt like a perfect, chilling punch that left me breathless. And then the switch to the nightclub with Lucas? Such a fun contrast: playful, cocky, and full of swagger. :))
Rick Martino
Finally, a real person not here to offer their "services" LMAO. Thanks for that and your comment, I hope you enjoy the rest of this action-thriller. I had fun writing it and it was epic to me, beginning to stormy end, so I hope it'll be the same experience for you!
Moonlit_irina
Hahaha yeahhh, bots are everywhere :D. I'm a writer as well but not as good as you :(, I was wondering if you'd be open to connecting on another platform? I'd love to discuss your writing in more depth. I'm happy to share my social media handle, or if you prefer, you could share yours, whichever you're more comfortable with! :)))@Rick Martino,
Rick Martino
@Moonlit_irina, Sure, worst case scenario, you're just a more sophisticated scammer playing the long game and I'll pick up on it and block you. Either way I don't accept services from anyone online, my FB is Rick Martino DLGK54
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