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大秦書說人
以經實現願望了
魔、魔法少女？
4 months agoReply
陰晴不定的腐男子
妳的文筆很棒欸(⁠・⁠∀⁠・⁠)，寫的非常有文藝感，繼續加油喔~

我的特別歡以下兩段：

『少女看透一切似的回道,銀白色的長髮在陽光下一閃一閃的耀眼奪目,從她流瀉著春天的氣息中,彷彿能看見充滿希望的未來。』

『柔中帶剛的樹梢上點綴著淺粉色的櫻花, 隙縫間撒下斑駁的光影,若隱若現的織在地面上。』

用“織”這個字讓人覺得有一種獨特的畫面感(⁠◕⁠ᴗ⁠◕⁠✿⁠)

5 months agoReply
羊宮
啊啊謝謝你！居然認真的看完我寫的小說真是太感動了！很喜歡寫這種細膩的東西，還以為很無聊～非常感謝你的感想真的讓我很有動力！
5 months agoReply
陰晴不定的腐男子
@羊宮,不會，繼續加油哦~⁽⁠⁽⁠◝⁠(⁠ ⁠•⁠௰⁠•⁠ ⁠)⁠◜⁠⁾⁠⁾

我也想順便感謝妳幫我的作品按喜歡(⁠◍⁠•⁠ᴗ⁠•⁠◍⁠)
5 months agoReply
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