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MEMEE
Hi! I really enjoyed your story. You have a great way of bringing characters and scenes to life, and I think it would look amazing as a manga or webtoon. A visual version could help you reach a bigger audience too. I'm a commission based artist if you're interested, feel free to contact me at:akiracomicart2@[email protected]
Moonlit_irina
The moment Davey pulls off his balaclava and says "I'm a burglar... I'm not here to hurt you" absolutely wrecked me. A thief accidentally becoming someone's only hope? That twist had my heart racing! The whole pantry scene is everything dark, unexpected, and so brilliantly written. :))
Cobra4
Thank you...
Moonlit_irina
NO worries :)), I really love it also thank you for such an engaging story! I really enjoyed the depth and creativity in your writing. I'd be interested in discussing your other works as well. Would you be comfortable sharing one of your social media handles so we can continue our conversation? Alternatively, I'd be happy to provide mine if you prefer. :)))@Cobra4,
Carolinegreyson
I was truly captivated by your story amazing work!
Cobra4
Thank you very much...
Carolinegreyson
@Cobra4, Yw! I got some cool visuals ideas wanna hear
Charles James
Hi, fellow author. I’ve been reading your story and I really admire the effort and consistency you’ve been putting into it, it really shows. I’m an author as well and recently published my book on Amazon. I enjoy connecting with other writers and exchanging ideas about writing, storytelling, and just ways we can get more eyes on our work. If you’re open to a quick author-to-author chat, I’d love that. You can reach me on Discord: charles_james11 / Telegram: @CharlesJames_1 or Email: [email protected]
Olivia
Such an interesting story! How did you plan the plot?
Cobra4
Thank you for your comment, Olivia. Plot, I had no plan as such. I just went with an idea I had.
Olivia
@Cobra4,Sometimes the best stories come out that way honestly. It really shows in your writing it feels very natural and engaging. Btw do you have discord or Instagram so we can chat there easily.
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