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Carolinegreyson
You really outdid yourself with that story excellent job.
2 months agoReply

Echoline
Thank you so much!
2 months agoReply

Carolinegreyson
@Echoline,Yw! I got some cool concept ideas wanna hear
2 months agoReply

Moonlit_irina
The airport scene had me absolutely on the edge of my seat! The moment Ander pistol-whips Tremoli and just RUNS, I gasped out loud. And then the Portillos showing up at the airport? The tension was suffocating in the best way possible. You know exactly how to keep you hooked and breathless. :))
2 months agoReply

Echoline
Thank you, you have no idea how much that means to me! I've been reworking the story a bit and adding onto it a bit so there's a lot in store.
2 months agoReply

Moonlit_irina
Yeahh I love this :)) also thank you for such an engaging story! I really enjoyed the depth and creativity in your writing. I'd be interested in discussing your other works as well. Would you be comfortable sharing one of your social media handles so we can continue our conversation? Alternatively, I'd be happy to provide mine if you prefer. :)))@Echoline,
2 months agoReply

Echoline
@Moonlit_irina, I'm echoline77 on discord
2 months agoReply

Charles James
Hi, fellow author. I’ve been reading your story and I really admire the effort and consistency you’ve been putting into it, it really shows. I’m an author as well and recently published my book on Amazon. I enjoy connecting with other writers and exchanging ideas about writing, storytelling, and just ways we can get more eyes on our work. If you’re open to a quick author-to-author chat, I’d love that. You can reach me on Discord: charles_james11 / Telegram: @CharlesJames_1 or Email: [email protected]
2 months agoReply

abella
Your point of view is excellent, and I truly enjoyed your narrative. By the way, do you share your work on any other platforms so I can easily follow up there?
6 months agoReply

Echoline
I really appreciate that! How I write the point of view is one of the things I'm proudest of in this story so far. I've been meaning to upload it onto Wattpad, but haven't yet. This is the main place that I like to upload all of my work.
6 months agoReply

Scarlett_Anderson43
Your story is amazing! Your perspective is so refreshing. Let me know if you post it anywhere else I’d love to read more!
6 months agoReply

Echoline
Thank you so much! It's only on here, as of right now, but I've been meaning to post it on Wattpad.
6 months agoReply

Scarlett_Anderson43
@Echoline, Alright! Btw I have some ideas to make your story even more interesting, if you’d like to hear them?
6 months agoReply
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