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凌步
嗚哇，惡婆婆耶，老公也不幫擋，小遙真可憐。短短一章就帶出了幾個主要角色，留下了第一印象！（我討厭惡婆婆！）

另外，文中好像出現了「張遙」和「張瑤」好幾遍，是筆誤嗎？希望你別介意喔！！
3 months agoReply
pencilyang
謝謝留言！

抱歉，真的是筆誤，感謝提醒！
3 months agoReply
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