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kikii
謝謝長評~
在場景描寫這方面，我的進步空間還有很多TwT​​，等我完結就去修改一下！

照設定來講，那個人偶放了一百多年，所以易碎（你也可以說是劇情需要

關於5和6的伏筆會後續提及+填（？），但毛毛的標題我起不來w（或許完結後我就會起了

最後，我會溫柔點的（？）（一口一個小姐姐我都快不好意思了w
7 months agoReply
我為九斗米折腰
XDD我覺得小說大體很棒，非常有歐美味，就是那種看歐美恐怖片時的味道，若是將小說翻譯成英文，我覺得應該會很有看頭。

反正不管如何，期待kikii的大作，我會持續追下去的！
7 months agoReply
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