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jennifer jain
My favourite scene is when Vipera steps out of the shop, seeing her black hair in the window reflection. Is that moment meant to symbolize her breaking away from her family’s shadow, or discovering who she truly is for the first time?
Lillie-Rose
Yes, it is. Good catch!
jennifer jain
@Lillie-Rose,Interesting! You on Discord by any chance? I’d love to keep the convo going.
Lillie-Rose
No, I don't have Discord@jennifer jain,
jennifer jain
@Lillie-Rose,can i have your mail
Lillie-Rose
I'm sorry, I don't give out my email.@jennifer jain,
jennifer jain
@Lillie-Rose,Can you follow me back so we can connect here on penana
Patricia
This was such a fun read! I love how you gave Vipera her own voice and personality it really feels like she’s trying to step out of her brothers’ shadows. The little details, like her saving up her own money and the reaction from Molly and the twins, made it feel so authentic. For a first fanfic, this was honestly really good short, confident, and with great Weasley family energy!
Lillie-Rose
Thank you so much! I'm re-uploading this from another site, it is finished. The first few chapters are rough but ti picks up at chapter 4 or so.
Patricia
@Lillie-Rose, Nice! I’m happy you brought it over here. I’ll keep reading for sure. Do you have any socials where you post updates or more of your work?
Lillie-Rose
Yes, I do! I mainly post on the site quotev. Here's the link. https://www.quotev.com/story/16779174/The-Weasley-Traitor-A-Harry-Potter-Fanfiction/1 This whole story is on there, complete. I am just re-uploading it here. Feel free to check it out, I post lots of bonus content there.@Patricia,
Patricia
@Lillie-Rose,That’s great, thanks for sharing! I really enjoyed your story it’s such a creative take and the pacing kept me hooked. I’ll definitely read the full version on Quotev and check out the bonus content too!If you’re comfortable, could I get your email or maybe Discord? I’d love to discuss a few ideas about your story sometime.
Lillie-Rose
I don't have Discord, and don't feel comfortable with email. But feel free to message here! @Patricia,
Patricia
@Lillie-Rose, I’ve really been enjoying your story it’s got a lot of potential!I was wondering if you’ve ever thought about turning it into an eBook or maybe a comic/illustrated version? I think it could look amazing visually. If you’re ever interested, I’d love to help or collaborate on that idea!
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