I left this story as it appears in my published book. If you'd like the link then I can give you the link to either the Kindle or Paperback version. These links can also be found in the description of the cover image on my Deviantart.
If I do revise this again then I will update it here to reflect any improvements made if anything could make it better.
Alanna is a character from a book series of at least two books that I have not published and will need desperately revised before being released to the public.
(The errors in those two long books is scary >_> and her story comes before Endless yet Endless is going to be finished with revisions and completion before I tackle her darker storyline)
If I do revise this again then I will update it here to reflect any improvements made if anything could make it better.
Alanna is a character from a book series of at least two books that I have not published and will need desperately revised before being released to the public.
(The errors in those two long books is scary >_> and her story comes before Endless yet Endless is going to be finished with revisions and completion before I tackle her darker storyline)