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燈凜
開頭陳述了主角里花的事業如何走向今日的成功，以及描述他也是頗具生活品味的人。但他在拿了冰箱裡的食物出來烤好後吃下去，就突然昏過去了。
這是為什麼呢？是食物被「加料」，還是他偶然進入異世界了？結尾留下的懸念很好，是會讓讀者繼續想讀下去的。
8 months agoReply
南嶺笑笑生
感謝留言，你提到的「為什麼」是非常好的疑問，令小的反省有沒有把伏筆補完好（好像沒有😨）。
8 months agoReply
楠都月
為什麼畫完的畫要在拍賣會再競回來🤣🤣
8 months agoReply
南嶺笑笑生
里花揚揚眉，帶著鄙視的神情自豪地說：「因為我才是最完美的人！」

作者按：絕對不是沒人競投……
8 months agoReply
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