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Lura
感謝洛卡先生這麼用心評論我的文章，那我也來對這篇文章表達一下自己的想法吧！
兩人之間的互動真的描寫的很細膩！特別是「害羞」這個情緒，在文章中以生動的肢體動作表現得淋漓盡致～
我很喜歡「請老闆先離開一下」這個橋段，更添緊張氛圍，而且很順利鋪陳了表白畫面。

總之，這篇是我很欣賞的文章，因為本人真的不會寫日系輕小說（戳手手），寫得很打動人喔🥰S啦！
10 months agoReply
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