This was a beautiful peace of artwork. Which is strange to say about a story... I could imagine what was happening and I find myself imagining myself next to Aedynn, and scowling at Kovia. XD
So freaking epic cousin, I need to read more of this~ Your concept art doesn't do this justice.
I'll make a few suggestions to make the reading a little easier with grammar and large chunks of paragraph, so make sure to take the time to look through the suggestions. :)
Thanks for the constructive criticism, I was entirely happy with this chapter, but hopefully I'll be able to fix a few thing s up with the next chapter, and I'm happy you're enjoying it so far :)
@SterlingWarrior03, Is that supposed to be was or wasn't happy with this chapter? And I have been waiting for this for a long time. OF COURSE I'M ENJOYING IT DAMMIT.
Thank you so much! It's really nice to know that someone likes what I've done so far... Hopefully when I get the rest of the story up, it will be just as good :)
I'll make a few suggestions to make the reading a little easier with grammar and large chunks of paragraph, so make sure to take the time to look through the suggestions. :)
And I have been waiting for this for a long time. OF COURSE I'M ENJOYING IT DAMMIT.