I just finished the prologue and I’m obsessed, my favorite part is when Aedynn realizes his daughter might actually be the only chance for the world to stand a chance, and you can feel that shift from desperation to hope. The dark atmosphere, the betrayal, and the way everything turns so fast had me fully hooked. 

Hi! I hope you're doing well.
I really enjoyed your story, and I wanted to share an idea. Many authors focus on writing but don't realize that visual content, like character art, book covers, or comic/webtoon adaptations can help attract new readers and keep existing ones engaged.
Just to clarify, I'm not asking for your story or any rights to it. I'm a commission-based artist, and I help authors bring their worlds to life through custom visuals that they can use to promote and grow their work.
If that's something you'd ever like to explore, I'd be happy to share my portfolio. No pressure at all!
Regards,akira
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This was a beautiful peace of artwork. Which is strange to say about a story... I could imagine what was happening and I find myself imagining myself next to Aedynn, and scowling at Kovia. XD

So freaking epic cousin, I need to read more of this~ Your concept art doesn't do this justice.

I'll make a few suggestions to make the reading a little easier with grammar and large chunks of paragraph, so make sure to take the time to look through the suggestions. :)

the prologue is incredible. The theme and story are already great and i can see this clearly in my mind. Very well made.