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星野メルル
感覺題材是個不錯的奇幻風格小說，我很喜歡這個題材，但應該是寫作的新手吧？
如果維持妳的寫做風格，但寫做方式用普通小說的方式書寫，例如說標點符號。
我猛一看以為是用詩或散文的文體在寫小說的新文體。
總之，我很看好妳的文筆和作品，我之後有時間再幫妳提出編輯建議妳覺得如何呢？
9 years agoReply
默默
謝謝你的建議，我會好好標注標點符號，我是寫作新手沒錯哈哈，很多地方需要教導，如果你可以多多幫忙，就太好了( ´▽` )ﾉ
9 years agoReply
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