It's really good! A little confusing in some parts, especially the scene with Kali (but yeah, as you said, this might be how Blake would've envisioned her). Also, you could've made it look less like a Bumblebee fanfic by involving Ruby and Weiss in more, but it's good! Keep up the good work!
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I guess I was stepping into Bumblebee territory, but I thought it would be sort of ironic seeing what happened at the end of vol. 3. Thank you for the great feedback, and if you haven't already, check out my Weiss dream fanfic (titled "Nothing Special").