Wow, managing to combine a swashbuckling pirate adventure with romcom hijinks is no mean feat., I'm impressed!
It was so wholesome how Mini steps in to help the crew, teaching them about their new bodies and how to adjust to life as a woman. Having to explain hygiene and women's clothes is so real X'D
I felt the ending's pacing was a little fast, but you were on a hard 3,000 word limit, so that much is understandable.
Great read overall! If you found it hard to write for the prompt, it certainly didn't show (^-^)d
1. I don't know where those 55w came from. I did 3k exactly.
2. This was the hardest thing I've written in awhile. I don't know why it was so hard. I apparently need more pirate practice.
3. This is a great prompt which is why I posted. Because I want to support that. Even if it's probably not what you were looking for. Sorry, mate. I tried.
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It was so wholesome how Mini steps in to help the crew, teaching them about their new bodies and how to adjust to life as a woman. Having to explain hygiene and women's clothes is so real X'D
I felt the ending's pacing was a little fast, but you were on a hard 3,000 word limit, so that much is understandable.
Great read overall! If you found it hard to write for the prompt, it certainly didn't show (^-^)d
It was rushed because I had to cut so much out XD
I've written for so many competitions, but none had me rewriting quite as hard. I wish I had your pirate jargon! You've inspired me.
1. I don't know where those 55w came from. I did 3k exactly.
2. This was the hardest thing I've written in awhile. I don't know why it was so hard. I apparently need more pirate practice.
3. This is a great prompt which is why I posted. Because I want to support that. Even if it's probably not what you were looking for. Sorry, mate. I tried.
2. I think it's great! It's a really interesting take on the prompt. And besides, pirates are hard to write.
3. Thank you! The support is appreciated. I think your entry is awesome!