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The characterization is very consistent and I like the pace of the story - quick, without being rushed. I like how you explained key plot elements without it feeling like they were revealed too soon - kudos to you for that! Can't wait to read more!
Nadia Ocean
Thanks for the feedback! It means a lot you took time to read it. I'll try to post a new chapter soon.
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