I just read your work and was immediately drawn to its visual potential your characters and world would translate beautifully to comics. I'm Aleena, a professional comic artist specializing in adapting written stories into compelling visual narratives.I'd love to explore bringing your story to life through my artwork. When you have a moment, we could discuss the possibilities and I can share some samples of my previous adaptations.
You can reach me here on Discord at (aleenajames89) Looking forward to the chance to collaborate.

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to make it longer you can add a part where he goes to a different house to eat the people in it but as soon as the wolf is about to eat the only person in the house little red riding hood walks through the door and the wolf is confused and little red riding hood say something like "OMG you have such a big crush on me that you can to my house and are trying to eat my mother so I am all yours" and the wolf doesn't know this her house so he just leaves without eating her mother.

Wait, do you have a crush on my grandma 

Make it longer